I had expected a much better reading experience. I read the Kindle version while listening to the Audible version. The writing is okay, but basic. It was easy to follow. The narration was okay, but also nothing special.
The storytelling moves very slowly. Lots of narrative filler in-between the key moments of the plot. All the information about American Indian history was initially interesting but then became way too much. Jane seemed to know the history of every Indian tribe in the entire United States, which made her knowledge unbelievable. It would have been better if she had just stuck with just her knowledge of the Seneca. The retelling of Indian history in the Great Lakes Region added an interesting sidebar to the storytelling, but they quickly got in the way of the flow of the story.
The story relied way too much on coincidence, which totally broke down any verisimilitude.
Big Problem: Lewis Fang, the document forger. Jane not only tells Felker Fang’s name, but also takes him to Fang’s place of business in Vancouver. How insane is that for someone who is supposedly smart? Jane wouldn’t last very long in her line of business if she gave all of her clients the names and places of everyone she works with. It just didn’t make sense that she’s supposedly a great one-woman witness protection program but then divulges her #1 most important contact in protecting a witness. Jane being so loosey-goosey with her most important supplier was just absurd and completely illogical. It spoiled the whole story for me. I concluded that Jane is really, really stupid and easily duped by a pair of brown eyes.
- 语种： 英语
- ISBN: 0804113874
- 条形码: 9780804113878
- 商品尺寸: 10.6 x 2.4 x 17.2 cm
- 商品重量: 181 g
- ASIN: 0804113874
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